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I n your conclusion you should restate the influence of cubism on abstract sculpture. The quote below is a reasonable expression of the influence and how variable the artists application of the principles of cubism was. It also underlines the importance of the cubist art movement.

You need to:
 * Restate the central ideas behind the claim
 * Reiterate the variability of the cubist influence
 * Stress the importance of the art movement.

Questia::encyclopedia The cubist break with the tradition of imitation of nature was completed in the works of Picasso, Braque, and their many groups of followers. While few painters remained faithful to cubism's rigorous tenets, many profited from its discipline. Although the cubist groups were largely dispersed after World War I, their collective break from visual realism had an enriching and decisive influence on the development of 20th-century art. It provided a new stylistic vocabulary and a technical idiom that remain forceful today.

B. Liam

Therefore, its is clear that abstract sculptures undoubtedly owe their existence to cubist paintings even though primitive art still played a large role in influencing abstract artists. The claim has been supported though the analysis of four abstract artists and their influences. Thus, supporting the claim the abstract sculpture owes its existence to cubist paintings.

Good Liam but focus on cubism. Leave the negative aspects to the qualifier. restate the argument.

B. Daniel To conclude, “Abstract sculpture does owe its existence to cubist painting” as the artists of the cubist movement like Picasso and Barques broke away from traditional art styles and began to portray image in a less realitic way. Using geometrical shapes to represent forms in nature and using techniques such as fracturing to show the essence of an image rather than the real image these artists have influenced the work of sculptors such as Umberto Boccioni and Alexander Archipenko

I like the idea of the essence of the subject.

S. Daniel The abstract sculptures of the 20th century clearly are linked to the cubist painting style. Primitive art had influenced the abstract sculptors but cubism was noticeably the most significant influence. Boccioni and Braque’s depiction of space seen in their sculptures proves that they were influenced by cubism. Alberto Giacometti and Alexander Archipenko influenced by Cezanne both depicted simple shapes and abstraction which is related to the cubist method. Thus, proving the claim that abstract sculpture owes its existence to cubist paintings. The Cubist art movement signified a difference to the previous art styles and cubism clearly impacted on 20th century art.

Good. Just emphasise the importance of cubism.

Christian Using five sculptors as examples, the effect which cubism had on the life of abstract art has been shown. These sculptors used techniques which varied from the accepted styles of the time, and instead allowed themselves to be inspired and influenced by these cubist paintings. In the two examples, the cubist impact can be seen, such as the technological approach to the style and the jagged sharp edged pieces. The overall effect which Cubism had on the creation of abstract sculpture is clearly evident, and therefore proves the claim.

Refine your writing. Emphasise the significance of the cubist movement to the whole of modern art.

Z. P. Stephen Shown through many of the artists previously spoken of, many of the abstract sculptures were heavily influenced by the Cubist movement. Umberto Boccioni used the technique of the forth- dimension, while Alexander Archipenko used the unique technique of faceting. As shown throughout the essay, multiple abstract sculptures “owe their existence to cubist paintings” that were able to influence the Abstract Sculpture scene.

I think you could restate the general importance of the cubist art movement on the whole of modern art.

Z. S. Aka Cubist artwork has been a revolutionary movement in the history of art. It has had many influences as shown and justified in the previous paragraphs. Pablo Picasso, Naum Gabo and Umberto Boccioni were some of the most talented, cubist influenced artists of their time. From these examples of cubist influenced artist it is clearly shown that cubism of the 20th century had influenced artists to form many different styles of their own.

I like that you brought out the development that cubism fostered.

Z. S. Archie

Many of the art historians agree that there is a connection between Cubism and Abstract Sculpture and that Abstract Sculpture has in fact emerged from its beginnings in Cubism. Cubism was a completely new language of art in its times where form, space, colour and technique of the conventional kind was replaced by a new interpretation of post-impressionist artists. This led to a move towards greater abstraction and later artists took further liberties with the form and style of art leading the way into 20th century style of Modern Abstract Art. Although there are many forms of Abstract Art, the entire concept of breaking away from tradition, introducing shocking new styles and notions has its roots in Cubism and it can be safely said that in Cubism lie the origins of Abstract Sculpture.

Excellent Archie!